Showing posts with label Tom. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Tom. Show all posts
Saturday, 3 November 2012
Wednesday, 1 August 2012
Tuesday, 3 July 2012
Saturday, 30 June 2012
Bug Study! Picture in a picture!
Early finishers of our bug study tried out putting a picture in a picture using a green screen and the mac application pages. They look awesome! It was their first go and they all did so well!
Friday, 4 May 2012
First Thoughts Writing Journal
Room One has made huge leaps and bounds in the last two weeks in their descriptive writing! Watch out Puffin awards Room One is going to take you by storm! This week we spent of journal writing time describing the weather. Today we had to write two high quality sentences, in which we had to 'show not tell' what was happening and then we conferenced with Miss Gardner to clarify our thinking. We had 'banned' words - can you figure out what they are? Here are some that have already been published ... there are more to come, so keep an eye out!
The bright light in the sky caught my eye because it is
enormous. It’s like a fire galloping across my face.
By Olivia D
I can feel the burning air brushing against my face while I jog
through the school.
By Jacinta
The sea blue sky is crystal clear.
By Chloe M
I increased the chilly clear air coming in as I slowly
unfolded my cosy layers of wavy darkness.
By John
Outside it felt like I was in lava. The breeze felt chilly
on my skin but the heat nearly burnt me. I was melting in my spot. I felt like
a fish out of water.
By Hendrix
The early morning air hit my face as I slowly step out into
the chilly world. The horizon had just unravelled. I steer up at the crystal
clear sky, something caught the corner of my eye, I blink furiously as the
bright light blinds my eyes.
By Kylie
As the boiling light rips my flesh open I start to dehydrate
so quickly it’s not funny. It’s so amazing. The crystal clear sky means I can
see all 1,199,993,489,801 stars and all 1,000,000 satellites.
By Tom
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